Unsolicited application from a Master in Business Administration graduate

by Isa
(Germany)

Well-structured and organized as well as motivated to help the company reaching their goals seeking a position to gain experience in a foreign work environment as part of a proactive team in a professionally challenging environment.

Response from Carl: Thanks for your submission and for your email Isa, which I also received.

Further to what I mentioned in my email I now know that you also have an MBA so I'd mention that right up front. So further to the email I sent you, your Career Objective could look something like this:


Well-structured, organized and motivated Consultant and MBA graduate with 4 years experience in consulting and 2 years experience in Customer Service Management seeking a position to gain experience in a foreign work environment as part of a proactive team in a professionally challenging environment.


I also might take out the "foreign work environment" part since presumably if you're applying to companies outside your home country, they'll understand that you're looking externally. You could of course make a note in your cover letter than you're actively searching for a job in that country, are willing to relocate, etc just to make it clear.

Carl