System Administrator

by Abdul Moid
(Dubai, U.A.E)

Intend to build a career with 3 years of experience as a System Administrator in a westernized environment, in a leading corporate of hi tech environment with committed and dedicated people, which help me explore myself fully with the help of my knowledge gained from my CCNA certification. Seeking a position where my qualities of a fast learner and the ability to take on new challenges can be used.

Response from Carl: Thanks Abdul. I think it's good that you mentioned your CCNA certification but I'd mention it right up front in the first few words of your Career Objective so that it stands out.

Your Career Objective combines a few things that you're looking for (ie. "help me explore myself") with a few other comments regarding what you offer but all in all, I don't really get much of a sense as to your skills or why someone reading this would want to interview you. Remember that with your resume, you're trying to illustrate why the reader should interview you but I don't really see much evidence of this.

Carl