Shipping Consultancy

by PS
(Mumbai)

A fulfilling career in Business Consulting where I can leverage my long career in Shipping and my Management Degree to add value to my organization while furthering my own knowledge & skills.

Response from Carl: Thanks PS. I'd like to see more specifics in your Career Objective. You refer to a few aspects of your profile but don't give the reader enough specific information about it.

You refer to your Management Degree but don't give specifics. I'm sure hiring manager would like to know specifics ie. is it a Bachelors degree? A Masters?

You also refer to your "long career in Shipping" but don't tell us how many years. "Long career" might be misconstrued by some readers as meaning you're too experienced or too old for the position so I'd think that mentioning years of experience would be better to avoid people guessing as to what this means.

I'd also suggest getting rid of comments like "fulfilling career" and "furthering my own knowledge and skills" since these are comments that refer to what you want. The Career Objective should show the reader (ie. hiring manager) what you offer them, not what you're looking for.

Finally just for completeness, I'd get rid of the "&" sign and print the word "and" in full. Remember to keep your resume formal and avoid shortcuts like this.

Carl