Sales Training

by Kevin
(Ireland)

To Apply my Vast Sales Experience within the Construction Industry to the Field of Sales Training.

Response from Carl: Thanks Kevin. Rather than mentioning "vast sales experience" I'd put the number of years that you have as "vast" means different things to different people. Specifics are always better than using generalizations.

Do you have prior training experience? If so, I'd elaborate on it since you've expressed interest in a training role but haven't told us anything regarding your training expertise.

Finally, I'd correct the capitalization of many words that you've written that don't need to be capitalized so that what you've written would actually read as "To apply my vast sales experience within the construction industry to the field of sales training."

Carl