Pursuing MBA, looking for a business analyst role

by SOMNATH BHATTACHARYA
(INDIA)

To secure challenging responsibilities within an international environment in a management technological organization that offers professional growth while I exhibit my resourcefulness, innovation and flexibility.

Response from Carl: Thanks Somnath. You mention in your Job Title that you're pursuing your MBA and are looking for a business analyst role so I'd suggest trying to incorporate the fact you're completing your MBA in your Career Objective and that you're looking for a Business Analyst role.

Much of the what you've written talks about what you're looking for and in particular the type of company you'd like to work for ie. international environment in a management technological organization. The Career Objective should show the reader what you offer them and not what you want from the employer so I'd replace this wording with examples of what you've accomplished in your career that a hiring manager would find useful and necessary to the job you're applying for.

Carl