Office Support/Management

by Karen
(Michigan)

Looking for an office support/management position that utilizes my 6+ years of progressively responsible office administration experience, excellent interpersonal skills, strong work ethic and Bachelor of Business Administration degree.

Response from Carl: Thanks Karen. I'd work on the opening part of what you've written since while you're stating something factual - you're looking for a job - the opening statement as written focuses on what you're looking for rather than what you offer the employer which is what they want to hear. The first words are an indication of what you want when they should focus on why the employer needs to interview you i.e. what do you have that they need?

For example, you might try something like:

Office Support professional with a Bachelor of Business Administration degree combined with 6+ years of progressively responsible office administration experience...

Carl