Mental Health Worker

by Isabel
(Browns Mills, New Jersey)

An interesting entry/mid-level position with an opportunity for an advancement in a growing company that will utilize my knowledge and experience as a Mental Health Worker in addition to my strong clerical skills.

Response from Carl: Thanks Isabel. I like to make every word count so if I were you, I'd start by taking out the word "interesting" from the first sentence since most employers I assume won't consider their jobs to be boring plus at the end of the day, employers are in the market to make sure you're interested. Remember that the career objective is about letting the reader know why they should interview you so you want to spend your time showing them why they should do so.

In that regard, you mention you're looking for an entry level/mid level position - which one is it? I'd pick one or the other - as a Mental Health Worker but then go on to mention that you want to use your "knowledge and experience" without actually telling the reader specifically what that is. I'm not sure if you have experience or not.

Carl