Marketing

(Singapore)

As a self-motivated, disciplined, responsible, fast learner and an individual with good problem-solving skills, I believe that I can make positive contribution to the company. Being creative and resourceful, I will be able to take up any challenges given to me and amass new knowledge. The vast experiences in sales allow me to be an effective communication tool. My job as a financial consultant has also taught me to be a great listener to listen to client’s problems and solved them.

With my positive attitude and dedication, I am confident that I will be able to make a valuable contribution to your company. I am confident that my skills, attitudes, and qualifications will meet the requirements for the job.

Response from Carl: This is quite long for a Career Objective. Typically you normally see Career Objectives of 4-5 lines so what you've written is a fair bit longer. You refer to Marketing in your Job Title section but nowhere in what you've written do you discuss any prior experience or anything even related to marketing.

What you've written tends to be very general too. You refer to "vast experience" but give no specifics as to how many years of experience, what you accomplished or even exactly what you did during this time. You'd be better served reducing this to a shorter version that is more specific and that gives the reader an exact idea of what you've accomplished during your career so far and why a potential hiring manager should interview you.

Carl