Marketing or advertising position

by Jennifer
(Wisconsin)

Seeking a position in marketing/advertising utilizing my strong creative thinking, interpersonal skills and strong ability to multi-task combined with a Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, Associates of Photography, printing, business and customer service background.

Response from Carl: Thanks Jennifer. Where appropriate you might want to add in your years of experience ie. you're applying for a job with 5-7 years of experience and you have 6 years of experience.

You list a number of personal traits but what would be better would be to take out several of them, leave in the most important ones and instead fill the remaining space with an important accomplishment or two that a potential hiring manager would like to read about.

Carl