Marketing Executive

by Zoe
(KL, Malaysia)

Seeking a position in marketing utilizing my analytical skills I gained in my 2 years experience in a telecommunication company.

Response from Carl: Thanks Zoe. It's good that you mentioned your area of expertise (marketing) but it would have been nice to read some specifics about your "2 years experience in a telecommunications company" and exactly what it entailed. You do refer to analytical skills so I wonder if your have experience with pricing, forecasting and things of that nature? This is great experience to mention up front.

Marketing is a very broad area so it would be nice to know specifics about any existing marketing experience you have ie. product management, creating collateral, pricing, advertising, planning sales campaigns, etc.

If you have related education like a marketing diploma or degree, I'd mention that right up front too.

Carl