IT System Administrator

by Raga
(India)

My ideal job is one, which will allow me to use my system support lead, system administrator, networking abilities and experience to enhance the team's productivity, customer satisfaction and achieve the company's goals and mission.

Response from Carl: Thanks Raga. Like many Career Objectives that I read, your one tends to focus on what you're looking for ("My ideal job is....") when you really want to focus on what you offer the employer. You do make references to to your skills and experience but the first statement you make refers to the ideal type of job you want. You could reword it to simply mention that you are an "IT Systems Administrator" rather than coming right out and telling us what your "ideal" job is.

As an IT recruiter I always like to know right away what platforms or technology you have experience with ie. are you a Windows administrator? Do you focus on UNIX? And so on...

Carl