International Business

by Norma
(New York)

International business professional seeks an entry-level position with a worldwide enterprise in which my commitment, team work skills and goal-oriented thinking will contribute to the company’s growth.

Response from Carl: Thanks Norma. I understand what you're trying to accomplish but let's think about what you've written. If you want to work for a "worldwide enterprise" (ie. a multinational) you can address this issue by only applying to multinationals so you can take this wording out of your Career Objective as it's just taking up space. If you have absolutely no interest in applying for a smaller company that only competes in one country, you simply don't apply for such positions but really don't need to mention it.

You mention that you're an "International business professional" but in the same sentence refer to how you're looking for an entry-level position. Which is it? Are you experienced - you don't mention any previous work experience so I can't tell - or do you have no prior work experience? I don't see how you can be an international professional if you have no prior work experience.

We really know nothing about your background or experience based on what you've written above. Remember that the Career Objective should show the reader why they should interview you but currently I don't see any such reason.

Carl