Insurance and Risk Management

by Pranesh
(Hauppauge, NY, USA)

Driven by a passion to excel in the field of Insurance and Risk Management, I seek a challenging position so to contribute to the success of a leading organization by integrating my Management, Computer and interpersonal skills.

Response from Carl: Thanks Pranesh. What sort of educational background do you have? Also, what previous experience and skills do you have? You don't give the reader an idea of where you are in your career and what you've done ie. Do you have 2 years of experience? Are you a 20 year veteran?

What you've written talks mostly about what you're looking for in generalities without any mention of achievements or traits that a potential hiring manager might like to hear about.

Carl