Flight Analyst Coordinator

by SABRINA
(UAE DUBAI)

To be part of a respected organization where I can have continued growth development in terms of trainings, seminars and on-hand operations that can enhance my knowledge and skills.

Response from Carl: Thanks Sabrina. There isn't anything in your Career Objective that refers to the Flight Analyst Coordinator position you refer to in your Job Title section so if you hadn't have mentioned this, I wouldn't have known what sort of job you're looking for.

You also don't mention any skills or existing experience that you have in this field so I presume you don't have any. If you do have existing experience in the field, you need to mention this.

The way you've written the remaining part of your Career Objective focuses solely on what you want from the employer when they want to read what you offer them. Now is not the time to be talking about how you want them to train you and send you on seminars when you haven't yet told them why they should even bother interviewing you.

Carl