Fast Moving Consumer Goods Sales Executive

by Neelam Srikanth
(Hyderabad)

An MBA graduate looking out for a position in FMCG sector, where my business to business skills works for the development of the organisation and also for self growth.

Response from Carl: Thanks Neelam. It's good that you mentioned your MBA right off the bat. As a recruiter I always like to see - and I'm sure hiring managers do - when a person puts their relevant education in their Career Objective just to let me know they have it. In your case, if you have a specialization in your MBA you could always add it too if applicable to the job you're applying for.

I'd take out the "self growth" reference since the Career Objective is really about showing the reader what you offer them. Perhaps you could add your level of experience or years of experience or some other indication of what you've done in your career in the place of this comment.

Carl