Enrollment Counselor

by Rhonda
(San Diego, CA)

To secure an enrollment counselor position using my 5 years of strong customer service and problem solving skills to help motivate students to accomplish their professional and personal goals.

Response from Carl: Thanks Rhonda. I think this is a pretty good start. Do you have any educational background related to the job you're applying for that would be good to mention ie. degree in education?

Alternatively, if you've already worked as an Enrollment Counselor you could specifically mention it ie. "Enrollment Counselor with 5 years of strong customer service and problem solving skills...."

The only other thing I could suggest is to specifically mention where your 5 years of experience were attained especially if it was in an institution that is comparable to one where you're looking to work now. If for example, you used to work in a school or something similar that would be good to mention so that you show the reader that you have already worked in a similar environment as the one you're applying to. Just a thought.

Carl