Electrical Engineering

by Ahmed
(Nasr City, Cairo, Egypt)

A challenging and improving position that will utilize my skills and experience in Electrical & Electronics field to achieve targets in a professional manner.

Response from Carl: Thanks Ahmed. Do you have an engineering or science degree or are you a professional engineer? If you have any relevant certification or degree, I'd add it in here right away. As a recruiter, it's always good to see this immediately since some (many actually) employers like to see job searchers with some sort of educational achievement.

I'd get rid of the "challenging and improving position" part and instead make some reference to skills or experience that you have that a potential hiring manager would want to read about. In other words, you'd make a reference or statement that refers to what you offer the employer and not what you're looking for from them.

Carl