Billing Representative

Results-oriented, detailed professional with comprehensive accounting experience. Background includes consistent promotions to positions of increased responsibility. Skilled in billing, audits, taxation, internal controls, and streamlining procedures, effecting a monthly savings of $5000 at Xerox Capital Services(Subsidiary of GE Consumer Finance). Audit financial billing based on Sarbanes-Oxley (SOX) criteria; currently seeking an Auditor/Billing position.

Response from Carl: Thanks for your submission. I like how you quantified the $5,000 savings. Specific accomplishments like this are great to have.

With that in mind I wonder if you could tighten up the first two sentences which as they read currently are rather general in nature. Saying that you are results-oriented and detailed is nice but it's probably something the hiring manager has read a dozen times already so could you replace this with something more punchy and specific that they'd be happy to read about?

Carl