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Assistant Bank Manager

by Shivika
(mumbai, maharashtra, India)

To secure a position with a well established organization with a stable environment to enhance my managerial skills.

Response from Carl: Thanks Shivika. Your Job Title refers to how you're looking for an Assistant Bank Manager position but nowhere in your Career Objective do you mention anything related to anything banking or even finance related. I presume you have existing banking experience and possibly financial education but it's not mentioned anywhere here.

Your Career Objective is very short (one sentence), is very generic and only discusses what you're looking for and not what you offer the employer which is what they want to see.

Carl

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