Administrative Coordinator

by Jim
(San Jose, CA)

A position as an Administrative Coordinator/Assistant where my intense focus, attention to detail, exceptional accuracy and 10 years experience with data entry, customer service, filing and handling sensitive documents will support the objectives of the organization.

Response from Carl: Thanks Jim. I like the way this reads. I guess the only things I can suggest are - where appropriate depending on the job you're applying for - would be to add in any specifics that a job requires that you have experience with. Specifically, I'm thinking about platforms or technologies that you have (i.e. MS Office, Windows, accounting software) and things of that nature. Again, just a suggestion.

By the way, I really like the "intense focus, attention to detail, exceptional accuracy" statement. This is very specific and really makes me the reader think of you as a highly organized and precise individual based on what you've written.

Carl