Administration Assistant

by Amy
(Gold Coast, Australia)

To gain a position within a company as an administration assistant and work my way up the ranks. With an eager and determined mind, I am willing to do almost anything.

Response from Carl: Thanks Amy. What sort of specific experience and/or skills do you have that you mention here that a potential hiring manager for an administrative assistant would want to know? What computer skills do you have? What other admin assistant experience do you have? What's your personality like? I'd think a hiring manager would want to know this.

I'd take out the part about your willingness to almost do anything. It comes across as sounding desperate plus it doesn't add anything to your candidacy for a job.

Remember that your Career Objective is supposed to show the reader what you offer them and why they should interview you but you haven't yet given any such reasons.

Carl