Accountancy

by Alana
(Northern Ireland)

Dependable and hard working student with an accounting degree seeking to join a reputable company that will help enhance my knowledge within accounting and provide me with further progression within my career.

Response from Carl: Thanks Alana. Perhaps you mention it in your resume but I'm not quite sure if you're still a student looking for a summer job or a student about to graduate and are looking for a fulltime job (or something else even?). Perhaps you could clarify.

You do focus the rest of your statement on what you're looking for when you should be focusing it on what you offer the company so try to figure out how to replace these words with statements that illustrate to the company why they should interview you i.e. what have you accomplished, what skills do you have?

Carl