Accountancy and Auditing

by Nigel Cheung
(Mauritius)

To secure a supervisory or management position that will best utilize my professional background education and work experiences incurred these past years to the benefit of a company.
I am a qualified professional accountant and have approximately 4 years experience in auditing in the big four and 2 years experience in accountancy.
I will also continue my studies depending on my needs and to better assist me for my job.

Response from Carl: Thanks Nigel. I'd try to rewrite what you have in a more formal tone and take out the "I" references since what you've written tends to focus on you. The Career Objective should show the hiring manager what you offer them not what you're looking for so just be careful about your use of the personal pronouns like "I" and ensure what you write benefits the reader and not you.

Further to that, I'd rewrite the area that begins "I am a professional accountant" as I'm not sure exactly what that means. Are you a CGA or CMA or similar? Do you have a professional designation in accounting or degree? If so, I'd mention it specifically rather than the way you've mentioned it currently.

Carl